This wallpaper deserves to be highlighted because of many reasons:
The fence looks so real and detailled that you can almost touch it. In many cases, wallers copy and paste similiar objects of the background (e.g. flowers). But this fence looks like it has been drawn stroke by stroke.
The colours and combination of highlights and shadows create a dark and mysterious atmosphere which suits the manga perfectly. I'm glad dolce-yasmin didn't stick to the original colours which wouldn't be as effective as the brown tone.
Not to forget the vector itself which is not only a huge improvement of the original scan, but also shows you dolce-yasmin's improvement of her vectoring skills!
Hi @btimnz and I ( @TheMajor ) have just made a new wallie. If you have time please visit our new wall we appreciate your artistic insight and constructive criticism.
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That's Okay I'm a total scatterbrain. You would not believe how many things I forget to do.
Nia & Sea[quote=Myself]Well first lets focus on the comments they were pretty mixed. All in all they were positive and or constructive.
Analysis: In my opinion The title was awesome. But the white lines were distracting yes there should be white but it should have outlined the blue flowers instead. Also there were some problems with the scan being a little bit dirty and blurred or having black spots. I can say this from experience vector , vector, vector. Yeah it takes a lot of time and patience depending on the scan and your level of ability but the result is worth the effort. and look for vectors by others if you want to save time but not sacrifice quality. In the end it's easier and better to vector than it is to painstakingly clean a scan. Now the BG great choice if you wanted to take this wall up a notch you could "try" and vector the BG(Back Ground) only because it would blend in with the character better.
In closing you had a great idea that was executed relatively well, you just need a little bit of help and you will be one of the really great wallers at AP.
[quote=Myself]Great wallpaper, great quality.. And I only see one issue... The text form the manga looks awkward other than that it's Amazing. Great work.[/quote]
Asa Shigure - Going 2 School[quote=Myself]Good job it has a nice filter effect going for the BG but to tell the truth most APrs will most likely look down on you for this. So... Vector vector vector characters, BG , everything... Time consuming but totally worth it. [/quote]
In closing the best thing you can do for your self is to learn how to vector....
If yo need some help here are some links to tutorials that really helped me.
sorry that I didn't comment on your latest Session Zero Wallpaper "Passing Promises". I just came home today so... you probably already submitted. If you still want to know my opinion, just send me a PN with the wallpaper index or the link to it.
Okay,its good. love the colors.but the font!use another one that would fit allen.
play with the layres.its more good when its kinda pasted to the background!i love the idea.maybe graffiti??ill give you some drawings.someone's good at that.
maybe put some blood stains.ill do a collab with you! just take a look at a good scan and you vector it.(ill do outlines.)
put some d.grayman related things.like exorcist..
but overall...its a good one!hope to see the revision.
1 year, 4 months ago
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1 year, 5 months ago
Hey I just finished my newest wall paper and i would appreciate your creative criticism. Thanks. [center]
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1 year, 5 months ago
Hi I just finished my latest wallpaper Let me know what you think. I value your opinion and creative insight. Thankys 8)E [center]
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1 year, 8 months ago
Hi ^^ I made a new wallpaper, I will be glad if you tell me your opinion ^^ Thanks ! [center]
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1 year, 10 months ago
If it it's not too much trouble would you please visit my new wallpaper in the Gallery. [center]
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1 year, 11 months ago
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2 years, 1 week ago
[large]Ohaio Mina-san...[/large] (n_n)/
I have just posted a new journal entry The Futuristic Samurai DJ World of Shwann on My friend Shwann and his gallery at Deviant Art....
Please Check it out..
2 years, 3 weeks ago
Happy New Year to you too!!8D may you have much osm wallpaper, comments and insert ur fav food here this year too!!xD
2 years, 4 weeks ago
Sure! ^-^ Happy New Year to you too!
2 years, 4 weeks ago
(n_n)/ Thank you and happy new year
2 years, 1 month ago
Np.
Glad I can help with your wallpapers. :)
2 years, 1 month ago
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2 years, 2 months ago
**well great to see you . . .
no big deal, i wasnt on AP lately
take care
n i'll check ur wallpapers**
2 years, 3 months ago
which other wall did you want me to look at? the link is broken on my page.
2 years, 3 months ago
That's Okay I'm a total scatterbrain. You would not believe how many things I forget to do.
Nia & Sea
[quote=Myself]Well first lets focus on the comments they were pretty mixed. All in all they were positive and or constructive.
Analysis: In my opinion The title was awesome. But the white lines were distracting yes there should be white but it should have outlined the blue flowers instead. Also there were some problems with the scan being a little bit dirty and blurred or having black spots. I can say this from experience vector , vector, vector. Yeah it takes a lot of time and patience depending on the scan and your level of ability but the result is worth the effort. and look for vectors by others if you want to save time but not sacrifice quality. In the end it's easier and better to vector than it is to painstakingly clean a scan. Now the BG great choice if you wanted to take this wall up a notch you could "try" and vector the BG(Back Ground) only because it would blend in with the character better.
In closing you had a great idea that was executed relatively well, you just need a little bit of help and you will be one of the really great wallers at AP.
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Edward Elric - Messy Graffiti
[quote=Myself]Great wallpaper, great quality.. And I only see one issue... The text form the manga looks awkward other than that it's Amazing. Great work.[/quote]
Asa Shigure - Going 2 School
[quote=Myself]Good job it has a nice filter effect going for the BG but to tell the truth most APrs will most likely look down on you for this. So... Vector vector vector characters, BG , everything... Time consuming but totally worth it. [/quote]
In closing the best thing you can do for your self is to learn how to vector.... If yo need some help here are some links to tutorials that really helped me.
Resource Group TutorialsPhoto Shop Lovers Group Tutorials by @LordYosho
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3 years, 3 weeks ago
mind sending me a link to it? I'm glad to help, just to lazy to search (XD)
(..)_ sorry for the inconvenience
3 years, 3 weeks ago
Hi,
sorry that I didn't comment on your latest Session Zero Wallpaper "Passing Promises". I just came home today so... you probably already submitted. If you still want to know my opinion, just send me a PN with the wallpaper index or the link to it.
Hope you had a happy new year.
dS.
3 years, 3 weeks ago
[center][huge]Happy New Year[/huge][/center] [center]
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3 years, 3 weeks ago
3 years, 4 weeks ago
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Okay,its good. love the colors.but the font!use another one that would fit allen. play with the layres.its more good when its kinda pasted to the background!i love the idea.maybe graffiti??ill give you some drawings.someone's good at that. maybe put some blood stains.ill do a collab with you! just take a look at a good scan and you vector it.(ill do outlines.) put some d.grayman related things.like exorcist.. but overall...its a good one!hope to see the revision.
3 years, 4 weeks ago
commented!! do check it out!!! great j0B!!
3 years, 4 weeks ago
do add me .... im already watching you..!!
3 years, 1 month ago
3 years, 1 month ago
Happy Holidays
3 years, 1 month ago
good job adding the profile pic.